Wednesday, April 13, 2016

Free Choice Description

Welcome back to the blog.
This week I am sharing my free choice description. I did my one about a scene. We had to you descriptive words. This was the only task that was holding me back from Funday Friday. Finally I finished and made it to Funday! For this task I had to find a picture on the internet then write a description about it. I choose this photo because I thought it looked pretty and felt like writing about it.
FREE CHOICE DESCRIPTION
Purpose: to describe
WALT: create content with clear and interesting details
Success Criteria:
  • Quick plan to prepare for the writing task (brainstorm words or ideas)
  • Interesting beginning and ending
  • Using the senses (see, touch, taste, hear, smell)
  • Stays on the topic (of describing for the reader)
  • Uses the present tense


As I turn around I see the most magical scene ever. Fresh reflectable water shines in the middle of the lake like a shimmering dress. The lake is so beautiful I feel like taking a dip. A gust of wind suddenly hits me, I get the chills. Warm weather wakens as I step a bit closer to the soft flowers. Purple and green flowers surround the amazing lake with sharp rocks around them. The taste of fresh air is an amazing taste. Freezing cold water makes me feel like a magic mermaid in her own kingdom. One lonely point sits on the top of the mountain with snow sprinkled on it like icing sugar on a cake. A faint sound of birds chirping away as the wind blows. I am standing in a little enchanted country. This is a beautiful and spectacular spot for camping and visiting.