Monday, October 26, 2015

Maths: Mass and Capacity

WELCOME BACK TO THE BLOG
WALA MASS AND CAPACITY!
I AM BLOGGING THIS BECAUSE I WORKED HARD ON THIS TASK AND I REALLY WANTED TO SHARE IT.
Last week our maths task was called HOW MANY BISCUITS! I went with Keighan because she was my buddy. This was really hard so MR M took a workshop to help us and below is how I worked it out.
HOW MANY BISCUITS
WALA mass and capacity. Recently we have been learning about measuring scaling, mass and capacity. This is the task we got to do with are learning!

gugujfg.png

Wednesday, October 21, 2015

Scene Descripion

!!Welcome back to TERM 4!!
This week for literacy I chose to do a scene description. First we looked at an example from last time and it was Georgia's. Then we went on the internet and I looked up beautiful scenes of nature and I scrolled down and found this one. After we did this the next day Mrs Love printed them out and we had to put it on out keyboard. For about 5 minutes we walked around the table and if we knew a word to describe it we could write under the picture. Then we wrote this story underneath. I was happy with it when i finished but I got some feedback though. My writing was an example as well but from this time.
amazing scene of nature   Google Search.png
Success Criteria
  • Has strong adjectives
  • Different sentence beginnings
  • Different sentence lengths
  • A simile and/or alliteration
  • Has an introduction, body and conclusion
  • Thoughtful word choices
  • Extending ideas with details

I turn around and in front of my eyes I see the most sunny spectacular scene I have ever seen! The tropical view you can see seems to light up shimmering sparkles in my eyes. If you take a big step on the smooth, silky sand it is burning just like the summer's air. Some water just looks so pristine and the whole beach does too! Over the beautiful view you can even see the horizon coming through. This place is as shiny, shimmery and sparkly like the Queen’s crown. It’s so relaxing you could just fall asleep with the summer air bouncing on and off you. Fresh green trees, leafs and hills surround this beautiful bright beach! Peeking through the trees is a white house. What a warm, cozy and glimmerous place and a great place for a summer's day or the most amazing holiday!